Teen Poetry #6 |
Bliss, Destruction, and Aftermath |
Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
I reminisce In my bliss And follow the path To the aftermath This is the introduction To destruction Every night I see Another side of he The one that is inside of me Every night I’m shown a world Into which I am hurled Where all dreams are unfurled This is an introduction To destruction It seems that all too often As my heart begins to soften It’s struck down into a coffin Follow the path To aftermath It happens every time I form a lyric or rhyme And the bells begin to chime Every night a scene rehearses Creatures’ putting enchanting curses Into twisted little verses I reminisce In my bliss And follow the path To the aftermath This is the introduction To destruction |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Great poem. Your poetry seems to be getting better, In my eyes, Other may disagree. Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
this was great!! cant wait to read more ~samantha~ "sometimes i just feel like |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
mmmm yes, I like! My favorite: "Every night a scene rehearses Creatures’ putting enchanting curses Into twisted little verses" When you think you have heard it all, |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Chanson quoted my favorite part. This is really good. Kept me hooked. Keep 'em comin'! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
thanx guys, it's been a while since I've posted and I thought my work might not have the reception it used to, I'm glad to see a few people stil like it. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I've always liked your work..this is no exception. Glad I can vote for it! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) If you've encountered bliss previously then there is all reason to believe in the road ahead so much more of it will await you! (sigh) I send healing hugs your way and my dear vote, dearest friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Got my vote Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
This poem is GREAT! But that's no suprise! I love your writing...the way you put your words together is unbelievable! I wish I had the ability to write like you! Very nice write! Has my vote! As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
awesome, just awesome! "The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept." |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
yeah, im definitely voting for this as well ~ Talia |
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