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Teen Poetry #6

I'm not quite sure...

LuckyFelix
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 34
Here.

0 posted 2003-04-12 11:28 PM

Most are comfortable on the inside,
while others play outside
However I tread the line at realitys edge.
Just out of reach of them both.
They all can see me and cant understand,
that I'm part of them and the others.
Unnaccepted by those who dont stride beside me,
I roam, like the nomad I am forced to be.

(Just a random thing..)

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

1 posted 2003-04-13 02:20 AM

Hehehe...I'm first to reply!

I liked this poem, especially these lines:

Most are comfortable on the inside,
while others play outside
However I tread the line at realitys edge.

Good job hun ( but then again, almost everything I read by you is great! )

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

2 posted 2003-04-13 12:26 PM

I agree with Jenn. I really liked this, including those same lines. good write.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (04-13-2003 12:26 PM).]

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