Teen Poetry #6 |
Nothing Less Than Perfect |
OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245 |
All that's supposed to happen will I don't have to be perfect. What I see when I close my eyes Doesn't have to be what's there when I open them There is nothing less than perfect And above all, I am beautiful. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Good thoughts here, I especially like the end. Well done, it gets my vote. WinterWren |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Yes, you are so right and following your heart and being true to yourself is what makes anyone beautiful and you have the magic in your heart! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ah yes...well, said, and so very true. I love the positive attitude of this. Wonderfully done. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
getting my vote too Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
You got my vote Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Hey girlie. How have you been? I liked this. Short, sweet and to the point. We all have to love ourselves. Add one to your vote total. ex animo, Aaron IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
This is definately a poem to live by...everyone is beautiful, we just all need to learn to see beauty in ourselves. You have my vote hun. ~J.Lynn "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
I really like this one! Definitely worthy of being in the book. Your writing never ceases to amaze me. - Cody - |
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