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Sweet Dreams |
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Passion New Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 4 |
Ok...this is my 2cd real poem...and you gotta remember, I'm only 13 ok? So anyway, I tried real hard, and I hope you like it. Sweet Dreams The vast stars fill the void of the night. The eerie moonlight casts shadows on the dewed grass. And blissfully I walk. My partner- hand in hand. The brook flows quickly and murmurs to us. An enchanting voice it has. We draw near and gaze into the shallow creek. I turn to my lover and inquire; "Doth my reflection bring joy to thy sight?" Returning my gaze he replies; "Yes, your reflection brings great joy to my sight. But what I see is not skin and hair. What I see is your heart. And it is beautiful beyond imagine and compare." I fall into his arms and he holds me tight. Skin to skin. Heart to heart. I feel his chest rise and fall. Listen to his breath- in and out. Like gripping the very essence of life. He holds me in his arms, tightly and securely, not wanting to let go. Holding me. Loving me. I gently place my head under his chin. Then all is silent. The brook runs quiet. The stars fade away. Swiftly the dawn arrives and I awaken from my subconcious mind- wishing reality was as sweet. |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
OMG girl...you're only 13?!?! You must be very wise for your years! This was absolutely a great poem...the imagry was awesome. I hope to hear more from you...you definately have talent! Keep on writing...  ~J.Lynn  "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Hey now, I am only 13 too. Don't let your age be an excuse. I have learned that here. Let your poetry speak for your age. This is a very nice first post. Riley Windows stained with the fog, words written in by a girl. |
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