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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-04-04 04:17 PM

Some comfort would be nice
when you're ready to break down
They've put me on this throne
but I can't wear this crown

So much expectation
But now I must...
Dissapoint you once again...

I know I'm not what you wanted
but how can I stop who I am?
It's like you put me through a test
but I didnt pass the exam.

So much expectation
But now I must...
Dissapoint you once again...

But I'm still alive
and sometimes I wish I could leave
Because the only thing your capable of
is to deceive..

I don't feel pity
so please stop crying
Your getting what you deserve
for all that lying.

So much expectation
But now I must...
Dissapoint you once again...

But I'm still alive
and sometimes I wish I could leave
Because the only thing your capable of
is to deceive..

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (04-04-2003 04:20 PM).]

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-04-04 05:13 PM

Wonderful poem! I love all your work so this of course gets my vote.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

2 posted 2003-04-04 06:31 PM

Good job, Staci! And, yes I voted for it because I do think it's REALLY good! Seriously, I think this is one of your best poems yet..but that's just my opinion. Well anyways, good work! ~Jess

"Poetry, she thought, wasn't written to be analyzed; it was meant to inspire without reason, to touch without understanding." -Nicholas Sparks

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-04-05 03:20 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Staci, this is a very heartaching feeling indeed, sadly many are insincere when they are trying to show sympathy and it fails to comfort anyone and never works! (sad sigh) It is a hard truth but I believe true comfort comes from yourself, you have to endure the pain and unerstand you are the subject, the dependant clause! God Bless You, sweet friend, this is very well-written, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Staci, thank you for sharing!