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dinky
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0 posted 2003-04-11 11:13 PM


I watch the clouds move,
and think of my favorite song
All i ever did was lose,
how could it have gone so wrong?
I look up curiously at the stars,
and wish that i could go back to before
slowly wondering how it got so far,
I am suddenly stopped by a closed door
My eyes move while i gaze at the moon
I hastily try to figure out the way,
and wonder where i will be soon,
i ruined my life in only one day
Tomorrow i will,
watch the clouds move,
as i think of my favorite song,
Never again will I lose,
with nothing left to go wrong


"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

© Copyright 2003 samantha rae - All Rights Reserved
foreverwithyou
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1 posted 2003-04-11 11:16 PM


good one sam this was cool

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

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2 posted 2003-04-12 04:13 PM




(big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, there certainly is nothing to lose unless the world lies with the sky! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Samantha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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