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Scandalous
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since 2003-04-10

Posts 9

0 posted 2003-04-10 09:46 PM

Within the Soul of a Lost Child

A thousand tears could never explain how the hurt sits in my heart
With my head in my hands, I asked the Lord why He was so vein and what I did wrong
Why He took you away from me, and how He thought I could go on
It was like poison swimmin' in my gut
I wanted to lean over the toilet, regurgetate the truth until my heart gave up
I was so young, but at such a loss of words
When I reflect on my childhood, a tear falls
So much time wasted, and it still hurts
No matter how much I try to keep it hidden, it still haunts my thoughts
The fact that I was abandoned by everyone but my mom
Is unexplainable, and that hole in my heart will remain as it sits and rots.

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

1 posted 2003-04-11 01:07 AM

It was good. Really good. Being lost isn't easy.

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

aaron woodside
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

2 posted 2003-04-11 03:32 AM

I enjoyed this.  Dealing with bad things is a part of life.  My advice...don't blame God.  We are our own people and we will stand on our own two feet.

My theory is that God gives us hardships to make us stronger.  It's the only way I can understand it.  Just remember before you go asking God questions.  She is unknowable.

Also just remember, all of God's chosen, have never lead easy lives.  All the prophets, true followers, even Jesus.  Can any of their lives be called easy?

Take what comes one day at a time.  Accept the hardships in your life as your cross to bear.  Bear it and go on.   You'll grow to become what God needs you to be.  Then and only then will you find your personal Heaven.

But...you have my vote.  I know what it is to think God is out against you.  And now I just bear my cross.

ex animo,
Aaron

IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI

aaron woodside
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

3 posted 2003-04-11 03:32 AM

Forgot to vote. Here you go.

ex animo,
Aaron

IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

4 posted 2003-04-11 06:35 AM

Good write, I really did like this! It's so sad. We're not close friends but if you ever need anyone to talk to I'm here for ya. Keep writing! ~Jess

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

5 posted 2003-04-11 06:29 PM

Very forceful poem, I mean that in a good way.
The emotions in this are very strong, I was hooked with the first line.
Excellent, my vote for this one!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-04-12 04:16 PM

(big hugggsssssss) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, my prayers go out to all the children in the world who have these deep voids in their hearts! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

7 posted 2003-04-12 10:59 PM

this is so sad but very well done you got my vote

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

8 posted 2003-04-13 02:24 AM

Oh my, I'm so sorry...it must be terrible to have suffered with such loneliness.

This was a very good poem and it hit me...I like poems who make you really think and actually envision being in the person's shoes. You have my vote.

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

9 posted 2003-04-13 08:40 PM

VERY, VERY GOOD! But very sad. It definetly hit me! Very nice write, you have my vote!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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