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Teen Poetry #6

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Paragon
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 114

0 posted 2003-02-25 08:28 PM

I dont understand
nor pretend to
Are you merely going through a routine
of saying the "right" thing?
when everyone is listening

You say that you want a "good" guy
one who's kinda shy
who doesnt want you for the night
but for life
one who will do you right
who will be your light
when the darkness closes in
one to hold you tight
isnt that what you tell your friends?
trying to appear innocent

Here am I,
The Invisible man
the one no one can see
Why?
Because I am everything you say you want
but never look for
You say you want a good guy
but you dont sound so sure...

Chloey
Member

since 2002-09-29

Posts 74
in a silver mustang convertible

1 posted 2003-02-25 08:31 PM

Very Nice! It was a good write and a good read!

*$*Chloey*$*

If you don't like the way I am.....screw you!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-02-26 12:06 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Paragon, I too understand this frustration, sweet friend, you truly would make a special someone so very proud and happy! (sad sigh) I guess sometimes descriptions can be exaggerating, my heart goes out to you, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paragon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2003-03-15 01:07 PM

Very nicely done. Enjoyed the read.

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 2003-04-12 07:22 PM

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

5 posted 2003-04-13 10:01 PM

Very good write

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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