Teen Poetry #6 |
a short poem |
tornskirt Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 87 |
dodging bullets white washed walls stained with red find a secret... deep within |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
short yet good, I think if you expounded on this it could be an even greater piece. I"ve read a lot of your poms and I like you style of writing very much.. ~Lexy |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) This is very poignant and powerful, sweet friend, sadly too much of this goes on in so many neighborhoods and the blood will sadly always be remembered! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Very nice Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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