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*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

0 posted 2003-04-05 12:44 PM

Me and My boyfriend broke up yesterday, let me tell you what there is no crappier feeling than someone you love walking out of your life. So I reverted back to poetry to help me through,surprise surprise.

I held you for a moment of a second
then you had to be set free
But for a breath between a heartbeat
you belonged to me

For a second of the soul
you smiled just for me
and for an instant of the body
you held me for all to see

For the space of a footstep
our hands were entwined
for the blink of an eye
I could say that you were mine

I will still watch you
with loving eyes and heart
it's just a little different now
because you asked to be apart

I will accept the space
with my little dignity and pride
I will lock the love and pain away
in my heart, were it can hide

So for now Aruvua
I'll be seeing you in dreams
I'll always hold close our friendship
among other things

You were my first love
and you'll always hold the key
I'll be here waiting, just ask
I love you, love me

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

[This message has been edited by *Belabebeautiful* (04-05-2003 02:05 PM).]

MissKlarmic
Member

since 2003-02-20

Posts 70
Canada,N.S

1 posted 2003-04-06 10:53 PM

that is a beautiful write , its unfortunate well all have to suffer heart ach at one point.hope things improve

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

2 posted 2003-04-07 10:06 AM

Raw emotion that still manages to be elegant, something I haven't yet mastered. Very good.
Jenni

You are what you make yourself to be.

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

3 posted 2003-04-07 03:06 PM

thank you for your replies. Break ups are so hard, I miss him a lot, but things will get better eventually.
~live and Laugh~

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

4 posted 2003-04-08 02:48 PM

Break ups are really hard, you displayed that well in the poem, it was a very good write. If you need someone to talk to you can e-mail me.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

5 posted 2003-04-08 06:49 PM

The first 3 stanzas really got to me,
they just kinda reached down and plucked at some heart strings.
The whole poem is, in my opinion, perfect.
Im terribly sorry to hear about your pain,
I hope it eases soon for you.
Many hugs.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

A.L
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 131

6 posted 2003-04-09 12:00 PM

Oh I know this feeling all too well, I just broke up with my boyfriend and he was my 1st love too, Its sad to see it end after so long and all you have left are memories that make you cry everytime you think of them. Hang in there...
"If you love something let it go, if it comes back, you know its yours..."

-Ali-

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

7 posted 2003-04-09 12:39 PM

Thank you guys for all your replies and for all of your support/caring about my feelings, it means a lot. ~Karen, I just might take you up on that offer to talk~ First loves are always hard and this one especailly because the relationship lasted as long as it did, but I found a good quote for him:
Sometimes I wish I'd never met you, because then I could go to sleep at night not knowing there was someone like you out there...
~Live and Laugh~

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

8 posted 2003-04-09 03:52 PM

I ended a 2 year relationship a few months ago so if you want to talk about anything, email me (luckysducky22@accesstoledo.com) Please feel free.
I thought this was a beautiful poem...I especially liked the references to time used in the first few stanzas. You've expressed the sorrow of the break up well, but I also think there is a lot of gratitude in here as well for the time that you did have with this person. The important thing is that you put your heart into this, and it shows. Great job.
(((hugs)))
~Kay

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

SixtiesChick03
Junior Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 49
NV

9 posted 2003-04-09 05:42 PM

I can really relate to this poem right now. My 1st love broke up with me about a year ago and decided not to talk to me until almost a year later when he comes walkin back in2 my life and starts messing with my heart again...so i know how it is. If you ever wanna talk just e mail me (SixtiesChick03@aol.com)
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!

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