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Waste of Time |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE 
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Time goes by Like hands on a clock Tick... ...tock... Tick... ...tock... With each second A breath is wasted With each step Life slowly deteriorates To a nothing Because at least once in everyone’s lifetime We are all empty Alone Scared Afraid of ordinary fate What’s to come... Our lives are full of worry We are never left to be at rest... It’s so unfair So cruel... So harsh... When death is viewed As a privilege... And the gift of life Is but a waste...* "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
first to reply, haha. um, i really liked this one jenn, good job.  If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
When death is viewed As a privilege... And the gift of life Is but a waste...* Those lines above are my favorite, they're really good! I like this poem along with many of your others. ~Jess  "Poetry, she thought, wasn't written to be analyzed; it was meant to inspire without reason, to touch without understanding." -Nicholas Sparks |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Wow, I really like this one. The last stanza finishes the poem perfectly and I love it! WinterWren |
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