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#2 Trust... |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131
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How many times will this happen until I open my eyes, how foolish of me to fall in again, why couldnt I see through all the lies? I used to question why I could never trust, why wouldn't I let anyone through, I pretended not the know the answer because I didn't want to face the truth, Hiding deep inside are the feelings nobody sees, I'm on the outside looking into the real truth about me, Was I a fool to think those words you spoke were anything but lies, I got sucked in by the charm that I now have learned to despise, there are only so many times you canlet someone back in, until they break you apart to where you can never trust again, Where do you draw the line on all the hurt someone can bring, you try to forget all the bad but somehow those are the things you keep remembering, You can't ignore something that eats at you inside, it consumes all the good in you, now the good that you cant find, Saddness takes over and these walls are caving in, afraid to let myself go, afraid to hurt again, the one time I open up, the one time I face my fears, it hits me harder than ever, I wish you could cry these tears, it takes all I have inside to cover up all the pain, But theres so much there to cover and now only regret remains, I don't care anymore for the answer I wanted for so long, someone ripped me to peices and I'm not that strong, Trust myself with secrets nobody will ever know, Holding in my tears and never letting them show, I know I won't get a chance to feel anything but pain, This is how It's always been and theres no room for change, lonliness continues to run its course, I'm used to it and can't let go...I'm not afraid to be alone because it's the only thing I know... |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
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Woah! This one is awesome, I like it better than #1. Wow, Im speechless. I couldn't pick a favorite line but I really like, "You can't ignore something that eats at you inside." And the end you worked up to was perfect for the poem. Excellent! WinterWren |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
Thank you so much! I'm Glad you enjoyed it! I'll keep on posting! thanks for reading |
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