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#1 Deny me...

A.L
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 131

0 posted 2003-04-04 01:28 AM

I wrote this...11-29-2002

It hurts for me to look at you and feel the way I feel, cause I see the way you look at me and I just see this sheild, Its hard to hold it in when I see the look in your eyes, Sometimes I see you, sometimes a disguise,
Not knowing when to speak or exactly what I should say, seems everyday theres a different you and my words might come out the wrong way, Your so unpredictable I always feel second best, whenever a pretty face comes along Im put below the rest,
Put on hold just waiting for you, to see if you come back or if you found someone new, hurting in the process, emotions being thrown around, longing to be able to tell you I wish it was me that you found, you say im just a friend and think that makes it safe, you think I wouldn't fall for you, you think my heart wouldn't break,
Somewhere along the line, you secretly stole my heart, you might not even know it yet but you continue to tear it apart, it hurts more everyday to wake up to this reality, just to look at you and realize that its all we're gonna be,
I wish I could tell you the truth and I wish you'd feel the same, but a chance for you to deny me, I wouldnt put myself through the pain...

X Q poet
Junior Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 47

1 posted 2003-04-04 10:46 AM

Hi,

The poem seems to be very nice... But it's very hard to read. I think you haven't pressed the enter-button often enough or something?

Either mail me, or post again and use the enter key, and I'd love to give you a review.

XQ

http://www.xqpoetry.com <-- Now with forums! :)

SixtiesChick03
Junior Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 49
NV

2 posted 2003-04-05 01:40 AM

WOW!! I can totally relate to that poem at the moment. If you would like to talk bout anything e-mail me (SixtiesChick03@aol.com)and i will listen and/or give advice.
GREAT JOB!!

A.L
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 131

3 posted 2003-04-05 11:36 AM

thank you so much, I have so many poems about this, I'll keep on posting them!

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