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Chameleon
Member

since 2002-08-07

Posts 99
Australia

0 posted 2003-04-02 08:45 PM

Facade

she hangs out with a candle in the clouds,
she ties her hair up to the suns reflection, so proud.

Its her facade,
Its sad,
her facade.

When she cries milk gathers douplets in her eyes.
She finds that soap doesn't lather with synthetic skin.
What a surprise...

Its her facade,
Its sad,
her facade.

Tabitha LeAnn
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 50
Kansas, USA

1 posted 2003-04-03 10:38 PM

BEAUTIFUL! HONESTLY I DONT KNOW WHAT FACADE IS SO IF YOU WANT TO LET ME KNOW JUST HOLLA I THINK I'D ENJOY THE POEM MORE. ANYWAYS THOUGH I LOVED THIS POEM IT WAS VERY BEAUTIFUL.

Chameleon
Member

since 2002-08-07

Posts 99
Australia

2 posted 2003-04-03 11:59 PM

fa·çade also fa·cade:

1.An artificial or deceptive front.

2. a showy misrepresentation intended to conceal something unpleasant

anya
Member

since 2002-07-27

Posts 393
London, UK

3 posted 2003-04-04 05:55 AM

liked this very much and i'm not quite sure I can articulate exactly why, I liked the slightly surreal images that you created,I just liked the overall feel of the poem, sorry if that sounds a bit vauge!
Anya

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2003-04-04 07:32 PM

Beatiful poem! You painted the picture well.
Going in my library.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

5 posted 2003-04-04 09:57 PM

awesome.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

Chameleon
Member

since 2002-08-07

Posts 99
Australia

6 posted 2003-04-05 05:24 AM

Facade

she hangs out with a candle burning in the clouds.
she ties her hair up to the suns reflection, smiling all so proud.

Its her facade,
Its sad,
her facade.

When she cries milk gathers douplets in her eyes.
She finds that soap doesn't lather with synthetic skin.

What a surprise...

Its her facade,
Its sad,
her facade.

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the first couple lines were lacking.
two words... burning, smiling.

EleanorMoonbaby
Member

since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

7 posted 2003-04-05 10:42 AM

Some quite surreal images used here, but they work really well. Nice one.
Ellie

I'm not dead, OK? I'm just a little electroencephalographically challenged!

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