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#1 Deny me (revised)
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#1 Deny me (revised) |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131
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It hurts for me to look at you and feel the way I feel, cause I see the way you look at me and I just see this sheild, Its hard to hold it in when I see the look in your eyes, Sometimes I see you, sometimes a disguise, Not knowing when to speak or exactly what I should say, seems everyday theres a different you and my words might come out the wrong way, Your so unpredictable I always feel second best, whenever a pretty face comes along Im put below the rest, Put on hold just waiting for you, to see if you come back or if you found someone new, hurting in the process, emotions being thrown around, longing to be able to tell you I wish it was me that you found, You say im just a friend and think that makes it safe, you think I wouldn't fall for you, you think my heart wouldn't break, Somewhere along the line, you secretly stole my heart, you might not even know it yet but you continue to tear it apart, It hurts more everyday to wake up to this reality, just to look at you and realize that its all we're gonna be, I wish I couldtell you the truth and I wish you'd feel the same, but a chance for you to deny me, I wouldnt put myself through the pain... |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
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hhmm I don't know if I like this one or the revised one better, but they're both good and expressive. I think I can relate to your situation. Great job! WinterWren |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Wait this is the revised one! Confused, anyway, you get the picture right? WinterWren |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
hehe I catch your drift! thank you for reading! -Ali- |
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