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Teen Poetry #6

Master of Disguises

infinite disaster
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 69
Illinois

0 posted 2003-06-09 02:12 AM

A master of disguises
She can fool anyone
To unknown eyes
She is seemingly perfect
But behind the facade
Lies something that she cannot conceal
Herself
No longer can she be dishonest to herself
No longer can she pretend
Secrets becoming a hassle
She tries to be honest
But after lying to herself for so many years
She finds it difficult
A master of disguises
Does she no longer know what to do
Peeling away the disguises
She is coming closer
To revealing the secrets
The pain, the words
She has once been so scared to share
Shaking, she takes the last mask off
She is no longer the master of disguises

lingering thoughts
Member

since 2003-05-03

Posts 70
Illinois, USA

1 posted 2003-06-09 02:18 AM

Oooohh i like this one

the whole poem was good , but the end, ended all of a sudden it would be even better if there was more !
but i still really like it
GOOD JOB Akie !!!

laurie
Member

since 2003-05-28

Posts 153
canada, ontario

2 posted 2003-06-09 02:22 AM

oh, god.. l should be crying right now. you've captured the events of my life in hte lsat few months...
all l can say is htis: you've touched something l thought was dead, so thank you. this is a beautiful poem, really good, and l hope u keep writing. please, keep writing.
laurie.

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

3 posted 2003-06-09 08:54 AM

This poem was really good. I think it has the ability to reach almost anyone with its message. I know that I myself have worn a mask in front of people. I think that to some extent most people do... wanting to hide what they feel is not something people will like. Again great poem!

-Jeanette-

Toasty
Member

since 2003-06-09

Posts 74
my little hole in wisconsin

4 posted 2003-06-09 11:53 AM

wonderful!You've captured something that anyone can relate to, at any given time. :0) Keep up the good work.

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength." -Francis de Sales.

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