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Teen Poetry #6
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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
uk
0 posted 2003-06-09 03:33 AM

My heart is beating slowly within
As I lay thinking of my own sin
My tears are rolling to the ground
As I lay and watched them fall

Your words of hurt are stuck in mind
They make me hurt deep down inside
You don’t understand my cry of pain
You’ve hurt me now its all the same
© Copyright 2003 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
PrincessNets
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since 2002-10-30
Posts 103
NewYork, USA
1 posted 2003-06-09 09:01 AM

Short and sweet, I like it.  Another great poem.  Keep up the good work!
-Jeanette-
Toasty
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since 2003-06-09
Posts 74
my little hole in wisconsin
2 posted 2003-06-09 11:59 AM

I like it!Short enough to easily keep a person's attention, and chalked full of emotion. Keep up the good work!
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