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Teen Poetry #6

the quiet girl

jayd
Junior Member

since 2003-05-04

Posts 13

0 posted 2003-06-08 05:49 AM

I always thought that she was the quiet one
You know the one who never talked and had little fun
And the one day I saw the real her
Cold, Heartless and mean

I never thought a person change like that
From the quiet shy one
to the bitch of the class
My feelings towards her have changed now
I cant stand to look at her or speak to her

Sometimes im scared that it will happen to me to
That in my life I have nothing else so I turn on it
Turn my back and never be able to turn around and see
See what I used to have

If only she had spoken up
Let her feelings out on what was going on
Tried to make more friends
Then maybe she wouldn’t have changed and lost everything that she had.

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

1 posted 2003-06-09 06:30 AM

it is hrd to let your feelings out when you feel like no one is going to listen to.and even harder when you are the but of there jokes. i haven turned yet. but i think im getting close. iloved the pome. it has alot of feeling in it.

i am in trouble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages thenhelp me.

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

2 posted 2003-06-09 08:41 AM

I understand what you mean. It is amazing how people always change. Sometimes I feel like I might turn around and be the mean, cruel, heartless person that I know I could be, but it isn't worth it to change yourself because of how other people change around you. It isn't fair to you and it isn't fair to the people who already know and love you just the way you are. The person in the poem who changed must have been really alone, if you ever feel alone... find someone you can turn to, so that you don't go through the same changes as that girl. Anyway, i am done babbling now. Great poem, lots of emotions driving this one. I like it.
-Jeanette-

[This message has been edited by PrincessNets (06-09-2003 08:43 AM).]

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