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leighsa
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 74
Oregon, United States Of America

0 posted 2003-04-01 08:59 PM

I've Cried
I've been down and out
With nowhere to go,
No place to run,
to let my troubles be.

I've been myself,
No one else, but me.

Theres been times when i wanted to cry,
and sometimes i did.

Some cries i held within, just to be strong
Now the self-control and strength is gone.

I'm too weak to carry on, There've been to many hurts,
For this fourteen years old to bare.

I've had a protective attitude, one thay doesn't care.
My thoughts have shifted,
my mind had changed.

Sometimes i cry wondering ,
who's to Blame...

IS IT ME?
Ashgiel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-04-05 04:19 PM

(big hugggsssssss) My heart goes out to you, dearest friend, I send many angel hugs your way as I too endured many tears when I was so young but out of this you will grow so very strong and rich in love and no on edeserves this kind of pain! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

2 posted 2003-04-05 07:33 PM

That was a very strong well thought out poem, I really liked it, especially because it's how I felt a week ago before things finally cleared up for me, good luck! Very nice poem.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-04-06 09:41 PM

Great heartfelt poem,
I especially love the 4th stanza.
Well done.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

4 posted 2003-04-17 09:27 PM

very good writing

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

5 posted 2003-04-19 02:27 PM

I REALLY like this...You worded it absolutely perfect! Wonderful write! I felt it the whole way through! You've got my vote!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

6 posted 2003-04-19 02:54 PM

wow. that was great, i've been there... i could totally relate

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

karebear07
Member

since 2003-04-15

Posts 64
Texas

7 posted 2003-04-19 04:32 PM

I read this poem and i felt the tears because i've been there too. I've cried and i've known not what to do. I give you big HUGGGSSS!! you'll make it!! love ya-Kara <><

StephyBob07
Junior Member

since 2003-04-18

Posts 37
Texas

8 posted 2003-04-19 04:38 PM

i love this poem! i can relate to it as well.
~stephy

Dreaming is the best thing you can do.

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