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Teen Poetry #6

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straindmind
New Member

since 2003-03-24

Posts 9
MI, usa

0 posted 2003-03-31 01:59 PM

its funny how we all seem to congregate around the preps
everyone wants to be one these days
pretty-small-in shape-all star varsity
the hell with corporate america
i realize i may not be perfect
I understand i can not lie
is there hope for the megalomaniacle words on your tongue
Get away
Stand up in the way
break away
and stop to
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SilentFreija
Junior Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 37

1 posted 2003-03-31 02:34 PM

OH GOOD GOD I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES! I'm a fan. Love it!

Where you look for broken hearts...you'll find me...
mend my broken heart and love me
because I forget how to smile.

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

2 posted 2003-03-31 11:17 PM

This is great!
Oh! AND WELCOME!!
I hope you find this a wonderful home that so many of us do.
I will definitely look forward to reading more of your work.
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

MissKlarmic
Member

since 2003-02-20

Posts 70
Canada,N.S

3 posted 2003-04-01 06:09 PM

very nice write, i enjoyed it

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