Declaration of Timelessness

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Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

0 posted 2003-03-31 09:36 AM

Don’t feel obligated
To place any breathe
In my lungs for me
I can do it…
Well, I think I can.
I live now,
Where the immediate future,
Is a thing of the past.
And it is obvious that time,
Was created by man.
I still grow old
But time stands still.
Now that I think about it
I’ve had 18 birthdays
In one year.
Only am I realizing this now
So you don’t have to breath
For me.
I am finally strong enough
To take this timeless world on,
Alone

X Q poet
Junior Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 47

1 posted 2003-03-31 10:40 AM

Nice one...

You manage to catch some of the lonliness and solitude with this poem, I think...

I feel you've written something that I can relate to...

http://www.xqpoetry.com

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2003-03-31 01:57 PM

Are you?

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

3 posted 2003-04-01 08:30 AM

Huh?

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

4 posted 2003-04-01 09:24 PM

Another good thought provoking one! I liked the emotion behind this one, you are very good at weaving strong emotions into your poems and for that I applaude you..It isn't easy. Well done
~Live and Laugh~

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-04-05 04:12 PM

(sigh) Oh Sam, this is lovely, sweet friend, I understand this loneliness and think we all should be emancipated in one way or another, if one is always in ones face, it gets harder to walk the walk! (big hugggssssss) Just know you have many too who love you and never hesitate to let them help you, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful hear, sweet Sam, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

6 posted 2003-04-05 07:35 PM

Thank you for that beautiful poem, it really touched me, the language you used in it was so strong and beautiful.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

7 posted 2003-04-06 09:47 PM

Very forceful poem, and I mean that in a good way.
Excellent, my vote for this one, I hope you get into the book!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

8 posted 2003-04-12 08:28 PM

Very good

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

9 posted 2003-04-20 12:35 PM

I really like this one! This is a beautiful poem. Perfect use of words. Add another to your vote total!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

Peacebri
Junior Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 44

10 posted 2003-04-20 12:49 PM

I love this poem and the thoughts it provokes. You did a great job and this poem made me think alot. Great job, keep that pen moving!

A.L
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 131

11 posted 2003-04-20 06:09 PM

This was a good poem...Be strong...and keep up the good work!

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

12 posted 2003-04-20 06:53 PM

...father time is searching for me,
yet my refuge can't be found.
By his rules and mortal fear
my journey won't be bound.

I'm pretty sure I get where you were going here, and I really liked it.

J.H.

Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H.

LuckyFelix
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 34
Here.

13 posted 2003-04-20 08:02 PM

Whoa, I very much liked this. Awesome.

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

14 posted 2003-04-20 09:46 PM

I'm practically speechless right now, your poem was THAT good! Hopefully soon enough I'll be able to say that myself. Anyways, you have my vote! ~Jess

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

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