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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Shaken until wits end, Overcome with a slight chance of death, Hades wrath filling his every move, Unwillingly left alone, left scared, left homeless. There is no hope, Only dark thoughts... Of what is and what is to come, Gasping for one last breath is useless, Nothing left, Just a chilling rain to blind his tears, Washing away the nothing he has. "Poetry, she thought, wasn't written to be analyzed; it was meant to inspire without reason, to touch without understanding." -Nicholas Sparks |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow jess, i liked this, good job. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
awesome, awesome, awesome! I love it and I'm definetly voting for it. Jenni don't ever let others tell you who you are |
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SilentFreija Junior Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 37 |
Cool poem! I like the feeling of it and how you worded it. Love it love it love it. Where you look for broken hearts...you'll find me... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
enjoyed very much, a terrific write. Maree  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Jessica, this is so very heartaching, sweet friend, in my philosophy, not one person is a misfit, sadly not everyone believes this and everyone should never be alone and have a warm home and family! (sad sigh) My prayers go out to all those neglected out there, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jessica, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
As you know, this is one of my favorite poems. I can't tell you enough how much I like this. This is SO good. Very good, Boo. Loves. As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il |
deep emotions very descriptive. I think it's really good. Crule world out there. sing'n fool M.P.D. |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
Wow this poem is so sad and filled with deep emotions. This was soooo good! It made me want to cry! Great work! Keep it up!  XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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Jaime
Registered
MemberPosts 250 |
It's pretty. I haven't read anything that dramatic since my days in the dark forum. Actually, no, I have, but this was good. Enjoy your cheese. - Jaime the faeries creep into my hair at night leaving it in terrible knots |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Thank you sooooooo much!!! ~Jess  "The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept." |
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tornskirt Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 87 |
wow... amazing.  never leave the light on if you don't want to be found |
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StephyBob07 Junior Member
since 2003-04-18
Posts 37Texas |
this was an amazing poem. it really made me feel for the person u r describing. great job! ~stephy Dreaming is the best thing you can do. |
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karebear07 Member
since 2003-04-15
Posts 64Texas |
Wow I could feel the lonelyness in this poem. I could feel the anger. Very good. -kara <>< |
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