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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-03-23 06:43 PM

Look in the mirror
And feel a little...
Disappointed.

You don't see me
As I would like you to see
It’s like your eyes are closed
When I feel so exposed
I’d give everything away
If you could just see me

I can see inside you
And I have the perfect view
But this is not where I belong
This feels so wrong

Look in the mirror
And feel a little...
Disappointed.

What you can’t see
Will put you down on your knees
See the tears in my eyes?
This is not a false disguise
I don’t hide behind the lies
And I don’t wait for my demise.

I can see inside you
And I have the perfect view
But this is not where I belong
This feels so wrong

Look in the mirror
And feel a little...
Disappointed.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

Punk Angel
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US

1 posted 2003-03-23 10:50 PM

staci, i love this, its sooo good.. i showed it to becca, my one friend, and lately shes been trying to get a band together, she wants me in it, but we wouldnt have any songs... do u get the hint yet?

We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back??
~*Krista*~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-03-24 01:56 PM

(big hugggssssss) I think there are days when we look at ourselves in the mirrors and don't like what we see and other days we are happy with what we see, you say one of those disappointed days well! (sigh) Now write from when you feel proud looking at that image, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

3 posted 2003-03-24 02:02 PM

I really enjoyed this poem.  It's so clear and..just great! My favorite lines are:
       It’s like your eyes are closed
       When I feel so exposed

Good Job! Got my vote.

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

4 posted 2003-03-24 03:00 PM

Great Job, it gets my vote.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

5 posted 2003-03-25 10:25 AM

thanks everyone, i'm glad u liked this.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

6 posted 2003-04-12 07:09 PM

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

7 posted 2003-04-13 01:55 PM

I really like this one...good write!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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