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SixtiesChick03
Junior Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 49
NV

0 posted 2003-03-30 12:20 PM

I can't stop thinking
about the day you left.
You made my world
a total wreck.
You told me
that u still love me
and we'd be back together
soon.
But you lied to me.
In the beginning,
you had me believing,
that you sorry for the hurt
you inflicted upon me.
I soon realized,
you weren't sorry.
For if you were,
this pain you caused me
would be gone.

[This message has been edited by SixtiesChick03 (03-31-2003 01:52 AM).]

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

1 posted 2003-03-30 10:51 PM

OUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!
This hit way too close to home.
Great job.

Imagine all the People living life in peace...
John Lennon

X Q poet
Junior Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 47

2 posted 2003-03-31 03:18 AM

Nice...

People hurt sometimes don't they?

Keep it up sister!

http://www.xqpoetry.com

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2003-04-01 04:55 PM

Sad story all too often heard. Keep writing and we will be reading.

To be hugged by a friend is wealth beyond words.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-04-05 02:57 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Sharlene, I send many angel hugs your way, dearest friend, sadly there are too many insincere apologies in this world and the thing I hate more than anything else is lies and liars! (sad sigh) I pray the truth can soon ease your heart, dearest friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharlene, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2003-04-05 03:01 PM

Sharlene~
This is such an emotional piece, and you've expressed
the feelings very well.
Nicely done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

6 posted 2003-04-05 07:43 PM

That does happen far too often to innocent ones like you, you expressed your emotions really well in this poem

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

7 posted 2003-04-06 09:49 PM

Since I didn't get to say this before,
Welcome to pip!!
I like this one alot, especially the ending.
Great Job!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

8 posted 2003-04-06 10:12 PM

Yeah, it seems that way at time...sometimes people repeat over and over again that they're sorry, but they don't act sorry.

~Liz

Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you..
~Mr. Big

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

9 posted 2004-01-20 10:27 PM

Sorry. I ---- this word. Too many times i have been hurt, and too many times they have said sorry, only to turn around and do it again. It has gotten to where this words means almost nothing to me. I think this poem is wonderful. The whole message is awesome! I cant wait to hear more!
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

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