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Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

0 posted 2002-11-11 06:56 PM

I Know…
I know that you and I can never be,
Because that would mean my dreams have become reality.
I know you don’t feel the way that I do,
But having you on my mind makes my skies so blue.

I know its hard showing you how I feel,
But if you can give me a chance I can guarantee they’re real.
I know we will probably end up being just good friends,
But I want much more than that so seeing you will never end.

I still know that after you read this nothing will change,
Even though I yearn for it to happen, I have to survive the pain.
I know my quest for love has to go on,
And I know hopefully it will happen before your gone

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

1 posted 2002-11-11 07:05 PM

Aww, that was good. Personally I'm not much for rhyming, but in this case, the point of what you are saying blocked it out. Loved it, great job!

Laura

"I have seen what a laugh can do. It can transform almost unbearable tears into something bearable, even hopeful."
-Bob Hope-

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2002-11-11 09:07 PM

any one who can rythm....i applaude...(cuz i cant) i enjoyed your poem. i think this is the first one ive read from you. keep writing. i hope your feelings are reciprocated

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

3 posted 2002-11-12 01:59 PM

I loved the rythum of this piece. It kept my attention and got your point out strongly. If you wrote this especially for that someone whose supposed to read it. Good Luck.

Darkness

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-01-20 10:44 PM

This one hits really close to home. I have a friend i feel that way for too, and he has a girlfriend at the moment for one, and secondly, he knows how i feel, and he told me that he didnt want to screw our friendship up. We are realy close, and so i guess i can see where he's coming from, but it still hurts. I can feel ya, 100 percent there! I actually wrote a poem about it, in TEEN POETRY # 7, its called "Just Friends" if ya wanna check it out. I really loved this poem. Definitely going in my library thingymabopper! lol
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

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