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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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Life entangled in this intricate design she weeps for normality and a sense of anything unlike what it is now. In the corner lies the innocent victim who's heart she entrances with her spells licking tears of anxiety and dependance from his face as she watches from afar. He knows not of the spell she casts upon him nor does she mean to entrance him as she bats her eyelashes in his direction glancing over the rims of her black metal glasses as he waits for her last sign of affection to cross his lips and for an absolution to arrive. Sticky sweet and slowly dripping as her heart skips a beat and she waits knowing the obvious shall appear all too soon she licks her lips and circles her prey pity having lurred him, carelessly away falling into her trap as if blind she carefully approaches her prey. Longing in his eyes she sees two brown mud puddles of affection the dream she knows never can come true his purpose he must serve to her the job he is meant to do a feast for the queen of seduction she spins him spun inside of her web. Face creasing with alarm he watches her every move as she spins her web tighter around him, capturing him though he was already her captive he understands what she wanted in the beginning was only a dinner companion but he loves her just the same. ~ Im not sure if this makes any sense whatsoever... I was just thinking about this [This message has been edited by Allysa (03-28-2003 12:30 PM).] |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Hmmm... I got the sense that there were two stories being told here. One about a black widow, and one about the control that a lot of women have over their men. *hugs* beautifully written Allysa. You never cease to render me speechless for a few minutes  If I love you enough will you feel it over the distance? |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
I actually got the same out of this write. It is very well done and has a great image to go with it. Keep em comin', I enjoy reading your work greatly. Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Skyfire, you hit it right on the nose. |
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