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Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-07-02

Posts 551
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2003-03-12 12:36 PM

But I'm not a nail
polish girl.

And I don't giggle
like the other girls.

I almost was a super model
I'm too small and my feet
are too big.

I don't care.

I've got some crooked teeth
and some bite marks
from the pedals of my bike.

And boys have never topped
my list of favorite pastimes.

I hated school dances and talking on the phone.
Happiest moments
are always spent alone

never wasted on tan in a can boys
and girls who crave drama.

I may not look like Barbie
(she has no personality anyway).
I don't look like an angel
and I don't care.

I like the way it feels
when I bite my tongue.
I like the way
pain smiles at my grimace.

I think that I am super girl
and I like to wonder
about things I'll never know.

I don't care.
What you see is what you get.
Is that okay?

www.enterthemuse.com

Darkness
Member

since 2002-10-17

Posts 202
The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies.

1 posted 2003-03-12 11:55 AM

Yes it is ok! Wow do you know me or something? You described me perfectly in this poem. I really dig the girls who just don't give a... ERR!!!... anyway I think you catch my drift. That's what I'm all about, be yourself and nobody else.

Good, Good, Good!
Darkness

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

2 posted 2003-03-12 01:09 PM

Good poem, I definitely agree with all that it says! Nice work!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

3 posted 2003-03-12 08:17 PM

This one really hit home with me, because I was on overload today because of people judging me. Loved the poem.

Riley

Morning mist clings to my face, and my soul opens up to you......

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-03-18 02:03 AM

Susan~
It's MORE than 'ok'..it's wonderful!
I absolutely LOVE the positive attitude
and 'feel' of this piece.
Great job!
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes