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Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2003-03-27 02:37 PM


back agian
where i like to be
to a place
where no one sees me

alive agian
just one more time
here for a day
then i'll be fine

i'm going to leve
the next day
back in the road
agian to find a way

i want to find the way agian
to brake out of my shell
to find something, someone
to stop making life like hell

because if i stay
here in my mind
theres someing out there
i'll never find

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Tabitha LeAnn
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since 2003-03-27
Posts 50
Kansas, USA
1 posted 2003-03-27 03:10 PM


I loved your poem.  It did have a few spelling errors, but who am I to talk. It was an excellent poem and I'll look for more of your work.
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