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Teen Poetry #6

chance

Painless
New Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 4
Roc City, NY

0 posted 2003-03-27 02:27 PM

I'm weak, so so weak
i gave him another chance
am i stupid?
i think i might be
its almost 2 weeks
he hasn't lasted longer
longer then 2 weeks
am i stupid?
for giving him
another chance
am i still holding on
should i let go?
i love him to death
i don't wannabe without him
what should i do?
should i have given him
another chance?

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

1 posted 2003-03-28 01:49 AM

i like to content of this one it might sound better if you structure it a little. but thats just me. hope to read more

Peach
Junior Member

since 2002-11-17

Posts 33

2 posted 2003-03-28 10:19 AM

I liked this poem. It reminded me somewhat of one I wrote, kinda the same idea. I really enjoyed yours, if you'd like to check out mine with the similar idea it is called Again. You may have to look back 5 or 6 pages to find in the last 30 days section.

If you don't stand for something, you'll fall for anything.

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