Teen Poetry #6 |
Lost Inspiration |
dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
I cried for you today, stopped by and visited your grave Wanted to talk to you, but knew that i couldn't tried to go home, but knew that i wouldn't You were my world, my inspiration You made me feel like someone, in this great wide nation I wanted to help, but didn't know how, now you're at peace, without a doubt "sometimes i just feel like |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) And know always that through peace there is a presence always, and your inspiration will always glow as your loved one will never forget you and from the heavens above watch over you with light! (sigh) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Samantha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Tabitha LeAnn Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 50Kansas, USA |
That was an amazing poem. Although, short it made me tear. Its obvious how much your friend must of meant to you and with love like that your friendship will never die. I'll look for more of your work. |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
*Sigh* Too many sad poems today. This was short and sweet and in a way, the emotions are almost haunting. Thanks a bunch! Smiles Sky "Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey, thx sooo much for replyin and takin the time to read this ~sam~ "sometimes i just feel like |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
So terribly sad but tender write..... Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
this was good man "I am who I am who I am who am I?" |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Oh, this makes me want to cry! Reminds me so much of my grandma. Ahh, this was good! ~Jess "The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept." |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Sam this was really beautiful. You have really improved as a writer! You just keep getting better and better. Great job and keep up the good work *Allison* |
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