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HeroicVillan Junior Member
since 2002-11-09
Posts 34Lost..... |
Thought i loved you thought i cared who could know what we'd've shared i loved your laughter i loved your eyes but those to me now are not but lies thought i had a chance maybe you knew but hey, i was wrong you didn't have a clue how could you love me me, who i am i was a fool and true loves a sham you never loved me what was i thinking you loved another guy with this feeling still sinking |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
I'm sure many can relate to what you are going through in this write. If it is still the way you feel...*Hugs*...It'll get better and just think of all the people that can help you along. I liked the read, thanks. I hope the best for you in the future. Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
Hang in there...you will get through this...i hate that feeling and im going through it right now  (xoxox Alison xoxox |
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Drummerboy06 Junior Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 46Indiana |
been there, done that. Yup, I know what that is like, but that was a while back. This poem was still very good, but I dont think it was quite well written as the other two of yours that I replied to. I dont know, maybe it is, they are all just so intense that its hard to tell. POST MORE POEMS!!!! I cant wait to read the next one, you certainly have a well developed talent for writing. Keep it up. |
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