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the anger remains
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the anger remains |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV 
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she cries just to feel the pain she laughs just to be happy she screams just to be mad the pain builds up the happiness goes on the anger stays the rain from her tears starts to pour the summer warmth of her laughter fills the air the darkness of her screams enclose all around shes better off unknown her tears are gone the happiness is gone but the anger.......... the anger remains. you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all |
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Finally_When Junior Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 13Land Of Misfits... |
I like this poem it was intense though had a claming factor towards the end. I think is an ideal that many of us shy away from alot! Good poem I enjoyed it greatly! Simply When.. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
hey all yes i am still alive! jus thought i'd come and say hi and share a little poem! you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggggsssssss) Oh Robin, this is so very heartaching, sweet friend, I think one only reacts either by anger or by more tears, time will ease the hurting so may the faith and hope begin to shed light and salt the wounds! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RobinRocker~ A lovely choice for inclusion in the new book. Nice to see you looking well~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A very good POV of anger. It somehow comes across in a gentle, calm manner.  thanks for sharing this |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
noah *big hugs back* i have missed you're warm comments. thanks! and thank you all for likeing my poem. robin i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow, I could have sworn I replied to this... *grins* This is very very good, Robin. You've got my vote for sure If I love you enough will you feel it over the distance? |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
woooooooooooooooooohooooooooooooooo omg tonight is a great night i love you all! hehe and my 7,000 pet rock lloves you to!! i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave! |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
I think this is one of the best I've read from you, Robin. I love how it all stays in the same order through the poem. Repetition makes my mind not have to think quite so much. I enjoyed this write, thanks for posting it! - Cody - |
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pearl6884 Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 72California coast |
very deep, very heartfelt. *applause* *To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...* |
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