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Eminem wanna be
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since 2003-02-04
Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri

0 posted 2003-03-25 12:11 PM



What do I do
when I have no one to comfert me?
Who do I run to
when I am too blind to see?

There's so many questions
with no answers at all
Like who will catch me
when I fall?

Why am I walking
down the wrong path?
You tell me know
and you'll learn my aftermath.

This are confusing
for me to understand
someone please help me
give me a hand

It's all unformiliar to me
to have such questions as there
so help me answer them
oh PLEASE......

What do I do
when I have no one to comfert me?
Who do I run to
when I am too blind to see?

(this one's kind of stupid but it all just came sooo fast so i wrote it down)

~Crystal

© Copyright 2003 Crystal Coker - All Rights Reserved
pearl6884
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since 2003-03-23
Posts 72
California coast
1 posted 2003-03-25 12:31 PM


There will always be fairies and stars to catch you when you fall. *applause* A poem full of raw feeling...

*To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...*
-Blake

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