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My Heart Is Broken
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My Heart Is Broken |
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Street Poet Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 82 |
Your mission is complete My heart is broken and my soul is depleted How can you do this to me, remember you said you loved me How we used to hang out and you used to hug me You broke my heart, it can never be repaired You got me feeling depressed and scared I ain't gon lie I still think about you everyday How could a friendship so right, go so wrong How could you leave your bestfriend here all alone You know you out of line But that's ok because there won't be a next time Your the only girl I ever had feelings for Now I feel like you don't want me no more I was the bestfriend that treated you better than your boyfriends Now I'm sitting here sad with paper and a pen I never thought that I would be writing this poem I never though there would be a day I wouldn't here your voice on the other end of that phone I hate to say it, but I miss you But my heart is broken So its only right for me to diss you All I ever wanted was to hug and kiss you But you've broken my heart and shattered my world I just wanna know how could you do this girl You was my air, but now I'm choking I guess this is what it feels like when your heart is broken |
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Denea Furr Junior Member
since 2002-11-03
Posts 31Indiana |
deep. i feel for you. "What a tangled web we weave, when we practice to decieve." |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
I don't recall reading any of your other work...but this was VERY good! I especially liked the first 2 lines: Your mission is complete My heart is broken and my soul is depleted I applaud you!  ~J.Lynn  "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
Oh my goodness this is sooo sad..and so heart felt...you definately have a kind and loving heart, one which deserves someone special that realizes what a great person you are...Great poem.... Jenn **Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life** |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
Very good poem! I really enjoyed it. |
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Rapscallion New Member
since 2003-03-24
Posts 7 |
I too enjoyed that poem of yours. Is it fictional or based on your life? I hate to do this to you, actually I relish it  , but the type of things you describe in your poem only get worse as you go through life. It sucks, but there it is. |
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Hevnlyfoxy Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 10NYC, NY |
i really like the style in your writing..finally some street poetry !!! Now let me look up a search for more of your poems : ) I hope there aren't anymore sad ones : ( |
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Hevnlyfoxy Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 10NYC, NY |
I just looked up the search and found only this poem...Hopefully you will write more- |
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pearl6884 Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 72California coast |
Good poem...Enjoyed the story-like qualities. *applause* *To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...* |
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