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Teen Poetry #6

black sun

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-03-24 10:35 PM

Black sun,
destruction of beauty.
Between the darkness thieves come to lurk,
war is unleashed from the desolate corners,
of the enemies perch.
Black skies shed no light on the evil of man.
Slither and slid, take no time to compromise.
Sley and run, they think not of, value.
They have devised a plan,
amongst the foggy tunnels of their minds.
They think not of, the bleeding lives.
roses smothered in mud,
they crawl along on their bellies.
The crippling sight of blood and flesh,
love and hate,
Roses smothered in mud,
The suffocation of beauty.
Black and lonely sun, he's turned his face away, its no wonder, look at what we have become..

pearl6884
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 72
California coast

1 posted 2003-03-25 01:32 PM

This poem definately describes the state of turmoil we're in at the moment...and with feeling. Thank you! *applause*

*To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...*
-Blake

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