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dinky
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0 posted 2003-03-23 09:29 PM


Not about to get sent away because of you,
All i can say is my intentions were true
Tried to blame me for your mistakes,
Not my fault your promises were there just to break
I always defended you,
even when you couldnt do that for yourself
All you needed to do was ask for help,
though i always stayed your friend,
100% until there came an abrupt end
Now i'll never see you again


© Copyright 2003 samantha rae - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-24 01:49 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Samantha, this is so very sad, dearest friend, this happens all the time and I pray everyone would only embrace hope and help and help work things out! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Samantha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
2 posted 2003-03-24 03:04 PM


Very sad, and nicely written.

dinky
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since 2002-10-19
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3 posted 2003-03-24 07:12 PM


noah- u always make me feel so loved!! thx
whiterose- thx for replyin it really means alot!!!
thx again
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

4 posted 2003-03-24 09:09 PM


Sam this is so saddish! I try to make u feel loved but you don`t like it.
I asked my friend that is 18,Dave, u know? i asked him on a date. he he he he go me! for on spring break! o yea anyway. who was this poem about? anyone I know or was it just..blah..written about no one. o well good job man!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE YA BIG MAMA!!!
        *Cosmopolitian*

[This message has been edited by devinechild22 (03-24-2003 09:10 PM).]

pearl6884
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since 2003-03-23
Posts 72
California coast
5 posted 2003-03-25 12:26 PM


So sad, but in the end, everything was meant to happen for a reason. *hugs* *applause*

*To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...*
-Blake

dinky
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since 2002-10-19
Posts 258

6 posted 2003-03-25 04:44 PM


allison- u mkae me feel loved but kinda scared at the same time LoL i dont think this poem was bout any1 thx for replyin
pearl-thx very much it means alot to see that u replyed!!
thx to every1 for replyin
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

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