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pearl6884
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 72
California coast

0 posted 2003-03-23 11:37 PM

The things we say
In this winter heat
Know no end
But we know
No beginning
It is only here
Only now
That the sweet vulgarities
Mean so much
We can say forever
But when does forever exist?
We can drown in each other
But sometime we'll need to
Breathe
Nights only last
Until the sun rises
We can dream in our sleep
But we always wake
One day
We might be strangers
We all change
But memories are true
And never fade.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-03-24 01:35 PM

(sigh) Oh Sarah, this is lovely, sweet friend, and may the memories always last and may the love you dream of ever come true for you! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sarah, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

2 posted 2003-03-24 02:06 PM

So far every one of your poems I've read I've loved. I love your style and everything, good job!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-03-24 06:24 PM

simply beautiful. I'll be looking for more from you.
Jenn

don't ever let others tell you who you are

pearl6884
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 72
California coast

4 posted 2003-03-27 11:06 AM

Thanks to everyone who read this...I hope you think it's at least decent...

*To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...*
-Blake

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2003-03-27 12:31 PM

Amen to that.

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

6 posted 2003-04-15 10:04 PM

very good

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

karebear07
Member

since 2003-04-15

Posts 64
Texas

7 posted 2003-04-15 10:09 PM

That simply beutiful. So true in life so true.
-Kara <><

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

8 posted 2003-04-16 05:49 PM

it seems like you captured to knowledge that love and lust do have way of dying sometimes
and that the moments they remain alive are what really matter...great job on portraying that.

J.H.

Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H.

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

9 posted 2003-04-19 09:09 PM

"Nights only last until the sun rises." I especially like that line, but the whole poem is beautiful. You're metaphors and imagery were beautiful! Very nice work! You have my vote!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

10 posted 2003-05-04 11:18 AM

One day
We might be strangers
We all change
But memories are true
And never fade.

This is so beautiful, and very true too!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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