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Teen Poetry #6

Lonely Girl

OtherSideOfTheMirror
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since 2002-12-19

Posts 245

0 posted 2003-03-23 06:53 PM

Another day goes away
In the life of the lonely girl
Another day with not one to say
She's beautiful.

She sits at home and thinks in rhyme
Of him and her and why
And all she wants is just to hear one time
She's beautiful.

She wants to burn away her shadow
She wants to drown her tears
She wants to believe even through her sorrow
She's beautiful.

CSwtThng
Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 124

1 posted 2003-03-23 11:08 PM

Very sad! I would like to tell her that she is beautiful. Very nice!

PoeTik JusTice
Member

since 2003-01-05

Posts 186
California, USA

2 posted 2003-03-24 02:10 PM

Aw, this poem is so sad!

Good work though, I did enjoy reading it!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-03-24 06:20 PM

this is sad but very good.
Jenn

don't ever let others tell you who you are

pearl6884
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 72
California coast

4 posted 2003-03-25 12:57 PM

Isn't it incredible how quickly self-esteem can drop? So many ways to replace it, though...*applause*

*To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...*
-Blake

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