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Teen Poetry #6

Silent

Eminem wanna be
Member

since 2003-02-04

Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri

0 posted 2003-03-19 08:58 PM

I've had writers block for a while so this will probably be a lil crappy
I have so many thoughs
in which i could write
but they WILL NOT come out
It's ALWAYS such a fight!

They come out all mixed up
and jumbbled
but to my surprise
some people hear the mummble!

Sometime they don't hear me though
I'm as quiet as can be
then they don't notice
who i can REALLY be!!

People think i'm too quiet
but on the inside im not
Inside im yelling constantly
always in the same spot

I don't know what their deal is
but i don't really care
NO ONE ever listens to me
WE WOULD HAVE MADE THE PERFECT PAIR!!!!!!!

( this skippes a lot but it all leads to one thing.....it's kind of comfusing but i'm dying to write SOMETHING!!!)

~Crystal

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

1 posted 2003-03-20 10:08 AM

This was an intersting post. slightly forced, but perhaps as you said it's because you've been "dying" to write something. from experience with a block, such as writer's block: it's easier to let your thoughts cool for awhile, read alot of others poems/ prose and maybe an idea will strike you?

Regina

"heaven truley knows that thou art false as hell...one that loved not wisely,but too well..she swore..'twas a strange ,'twas passing strange"-othello

AJMGW
Member

since 2002-11-19

Posts 57
Galaxy Roller Rink

2 posted 2003-03-20 12:37 PM

I know how you feel.

(have you read mine, the worst ever) every good thing haas its flaws. some times the best things can come out of a writes block.

don't struggle to get stuff out. just let your thoughts flow
Melissa

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