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Teen Poetry #6

A seriouS lyric...

HeroicVillan
Junior Member

since 2002-11-09

Posts 34
Lost.....

0 posted 2003-03-19 08:08 PM

i browse through the section
of life standing still
make a small selection
while being stalked for the kill

darkness clouds the skies
and all that i can see
is a world of lies
leading back to me

as i make my choice
the predator scents me
a small leakage of my voice
and im the only thing he sees

i try to make a sound
in an effort to stay free
but theres no one around
no one can help me

Eminem wanna be
Member

since 2003-02-04

Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri

1 posted 2003-03-19 08:45 PM

hey that was pretty good

~Crystal

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2003-03-20 10:19 AM

So far, i think this poem was awesome. uIt is slightly different from your others, a different approach. I liked it beaucoup.

Regina

"heaven truley knows that thou art false as hell...one that loved not wisely,but too well..she swore..'twas a strange ,'twas passing strange"-othello

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