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Teen Poetry #6
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HeroicVillan
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since 2002-11-09
Posts 34
Lost.....
0 posted 2003-03-19 07:55 PM


All that we lack
is space to be free
The wind at our back
with nothing to see
No place to go
takin it slow
cruisin around
makin some sound
this is my town
you just cant see the crown
© Copyright 2003 James Bicknell - All Rights Reserved
Ina
Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada
1 posted 2003-03-20 10:15 AM

I've noticed in the last few poems I've read from you, you use the word "crown" often?....I enjoyed this poem, nicely written and had some substance....Keppon writing.

Regina

"heaven truley knows that thou art false as hell...one that loved not wisely,but too well..she swore..'twas a strange ,'twas passing strange"-othello
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