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Teen Poetry #6

Burning

Starsfalling
Member

since 2003-03-18

Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows

0 posted 2003-03-18 09:27 PM

**** this life
I’m going to burn in hell
The hell that I created
Through my own twisted wishes
And my own desires
****** by my ambition
And cruel ostentations to the truth
Fate left in the wrong hands
No training required
All I ran on was instinct
Burn with the words
And die with the “love”
What should you care?
You’ve never noticed before
Why initiate that now?
Just let me burn in peace
Without your pity love….

weee today is a bad night... so im sorry if im short with ya
-lance

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2003-03-18 09:36 PM

Hello lance, Welcome to Passions.

I remember this write. It's really very sad, and filled with the darkness of the teenage years, (yes I remember the teenage years) way back when dinosaurs walked the earth.

A nice write. I should have told you that you can't use the standard *four letter* words in this forum. It's okay, I've done it before.

I look forward to reading more of your work

Starsfalling
Member

since 2003-03-18

Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows

2 posted 2003-03-18 09:43 PM

oh damn.. i hope that didnt get bleeped out as well... thank ya whiterose
-lance

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