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Teen Poetry #6

Judging you

AJMGW
Member

since 2002-11-19

Posts 57
Galaxy Roller Rink

0 posted 2003-03-17 12:47 PM

I'm in a brain fart phase so sorry.

Do you know the feeling,
the rush you get nowere else?
when everyones watching,
then you feel your pulse.

They're there to see,
if your good enough to be,
one of them.

your not sure you belong,
six eyes are judging,
eight more are hoping,
and your on the floor alone.

no ones there to hold your hand
there even judging how you stand.

in 2 minutes
its over
you won.
the gold metal is yours!
then you get another!

then all the time you worked paid off

your the campion
no one can top that.

^*~AJMGW~*^

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-03-17 02:00 PM

(big hugggsssssss) No judge can ever compare to yourself, I am serious when I say this so push those critics away! (smiles) I love the willpower in this, dearest friend, this certainly is novel as I never thought of those many eyes watching, God Bless You, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

2 posted 2003-04-20 04:41 PM

Very good

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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