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Faceless Pawn
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since 2003-03-16
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0 posted 2003-03-16 10:33 AM

How can you deny what you want?
What you desire? What you need?
How can you want something,
then refuse it once its yours?
How can you take A life, A wonderful life,
and toss it away?...

How can you redeem what you've done?
...You can't.
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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-03-16 11:01 AM

Sometimes only YOU can answer those Q's, and you seem to have found that truth!
Welcome, and have a great time here at Passions.
Albino_Jenn
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since 2003-03-03
Posts 105
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2 posted 2003-03-16 01:09 PM

Welcome to passions, Good Job
Jenn

**Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life**
Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2003-03-18 12:49 PM

Very powerful words here. I liked the poem. I felt it completely. Welcome to PIP. I hope you enjoy your stay here and continue to post as well as reply.

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Look at the sun and burn your eyes. You'll be fine in the end.
PoeTik JusTice
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since 2003-01-05
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4 posted 2003-03-18 12:32 PM

Good work! Welcome to passions! Hope to read more from you!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
     *~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge
BrokenAngel
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since 2002-01-06
Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA
5 posted 2003-03-18 01:46 PM

Short but powerful ad to the point.  I loved it!!  Welcome to Passions and I look forward to reading more of your work.  Great write!!

Read my work and read my thoughts
I'll go back into the night now
---Night Angel
AJMGW
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 57
Galaxy Roller Rink
6 posted 2003-03-18 09:58 PM

Welcome! well done! write more so I can rad more! I like your stuff.


Melissa   =
WinterWren
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since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044
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7 posted 2003-03-19 02:02 PM

WELCOME TO PIP!!!!
Good first post, I hope to see more of you around.
I like your name by the way.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."
Faceless Pawn
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8 posted 2003-03-19 03:35 PM

Thank you all, very much.
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