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Silent~Inspirations
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since 2003-01-25
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0 posted 2003-03-15 07:40 PM


I just wrote this, haven't really thought about it or proof-read cause I'm really not that good at poetry.So maybe you all can help me.
Thank You~

"I wish you would listen"

I wonder if you hear the music
If you hear the words they’re saying
their words of the hard life
do they affect you

I wonder if your vibing from words
or feeling the bass pulsate
the words in the song were meant to be heard
are you hearing them

Some rappers rap to instill their sexual fantasy
but they also rap for you to listen
to their hardships they’ve over come
didn’t you hear that song

What do I know
Your just a Teen-age Boy
sheltered and clean
wishing you had more

Are you listening
Do you hear their sorrows
their dreams they overcame
do you understand what they are saying

Or are you oblivious
still wishing you had more
I wish you would listen
because you have so much more

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