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Teen Poetry #6

Gone.

LuckyFelix
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 34
Here.

0 posted 2003-03-13 08:33 PM

You're gone to me.
Numb, fallen, dead.
I've no emotion left for you.
Your tears wont affect me.
Your glee, I'll not care.
You're an object now.
Lifeless, and cold.

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

1 posted 2003-03-14 06:54 PM

This kind of brings me to believe that you have shut yourself off from people. I realize that the point of this may be to keep out emotion...but some of the best pieces are filled with them.
I liked it though...
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

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