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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131
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"Liar" As hard as it is to do, I wish I didn't care, I wish I wouldn't look back at you when I catch you in a stare, My nights are lonely and my days are so long, I wish you weren't so blind to see where exactly you went wrong, You don't need to bother, I don't need to care, Your apologies are out the door, and you'll soon be meeting them there, Tell me how it is that you sleep in the night without thinking you lost the only good thing in you life? You took me for granted and used up my time, Searching for the excuse your never gonna find, Don't try to make it better, please just let me be, I finally realized that trying to change you, only changed me, I don't wanna hear your lines, I've heard them all before, They're all a part of your little game, that kept me latched on asking for more, Ignoring the voice in my head, the honest voice inside, telling me things that were true, the things you'd probably hide, Always think your better, hating what everyone else does, Always feeling sorry for yourself, you have no reason to be put above, Your no better than the lies you speak or any of the pain I felt, and you think your love less, I think you hate yourself, There's no one to blame here except for you, Don't sit there and tell me you can't explain the things you do, Don't tell me the same words that you used to get to her, I'm not as naieve and I'll get to you first, Can't you see that you lie to yourself, you hate the person you've become, Allowing the words I speak to seep deeper...the truth is hard to hide from, Holding onto your lies, that's the only truth you live behind, Ignorant to the person, I hope you'll never find, You don't deserve any more than who you are, You've had too many second chances, any hope left has drifted too far, Hold tight to your lies, it's all you have left, You lost me, the only good you should have kept, You turned you back and walked away from everything you know, Start counting all your regrets, because you're left here all alone..... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) I too pity those who lie ever so much, there is no thing I hate worse than dishonesty and I think the grief and the loneliness is the perfect retribution for liars so they can see what they did to themselves! (sad sigh) Always look for the honest ears, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet A.L, thank you for sharing! May love and light awlays shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-15-2003 05:18 PM).] |
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Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
This is a great poem, one of my good friends went through that I feel so deeply for him, and you if delt with that turmoil. Good Job I really felt the pain. Jenn **Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life** |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
Thank you so much, I'm glad you can relate  ) |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Good Job! (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Great job, enjoyed the read of this. |
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CSwtThng Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 124 |
I really enjoyed this poem. I think I liked it so much because I can relate. |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
Thank you all for reading ) |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I can really relate to this. Great poem. Dawn |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
Thank you |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
great poem  Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
Great write...keep it up! ~J.Lynn  "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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SixtiesChick03 Junior Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 49NV |
This is a great poem...I too can also relate to this. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Nice write. I really enjoyed this. You have my vote. As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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tornskirt Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 87 |
you got my vote and i can totally relate, as everyone else already said   but keep writing, this is great!never leave the light on if you don't want to be found |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
Thank you all so much for reading and replying. it means alot to me that some of you can relate to my poems! Thanks again! "Why do we fall in love when love will only tear us apart" -ali- |
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