Teen Poetry #6 |
Lost |
Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
You slowly fade as time moves on My feelings left behind The friendship we once shared I have lost, and can not find You’re heart has changed You’re not the same You take for granted That I will always remain How foolish of me to think That I was more then just some chick That I meant something to you Oh how you contradict You said that I was special, Truly awesome and great You said you’d never lose me Well it might just be too late You my friend need to see I won’t put up with this sh*t If you want my love and devotion You must cherish it I am not some girl You can only talk to at will My life is moving forward As I watch you standing still You wait for opportunity To come knocking at your door I won’t be that other friend I will wait for you no more You slowly fade as time moves on My feelings left behind The friendship we once shared I have lost, and can not find **Tell me what ya really think..I can handle it** Thanks, Jenn **Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life** [This message has been edited by Albino_Jenn (03-15-2003 04:26 PM).] |
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TigerZ Member
since 2002-01-02
Posts 83Ontario, Canada |
I loved it. Thx for the read A life without love…is no life at all. |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
That was a great poem, I can relate to it so much...guys just dont realize what they've truly lost until its gone, but they expect us to wait around until then... |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
Hey jenn!! First of all id like to thank you for your wonderful coment to my latest poem. As for your poem it was extremely well written. I'm a guy and i definitely agree with ya 100 percent. It's not right for a guy to toy with a girls heart in any way. Well i look forward to reading more from you and if u ever need someone to talk to ya can contact me on my im screen name which is chrissccr18 or email me at [email protected] |
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Albino_Jenn Member
since 2003-03-03
Posts 105Ontario, Canada |
Thanks for the offer of contacting you..I will keep that in mind..you can contact me too if you [email protected] a sweetheart, thanks again Jenn **Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life** |
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