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Teen Poetry #6

Ramble of the Pawn

Faceless Pawn
New Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 8
around...

0 posted 2003-03-17 04:59 PM

Diabloic thoughts,
of horrid deeds.
So many misunderstood
emotions express themselves..
as sadistic and morbid.
I dont choose to mask them,
yet they remain so.
Loud music and a dark room..
The only light from the screen.
My soul wants out..and my heart wants in.
And this is why I'm always confused.
Its seems I must remove myself...
Clarification comes at the cost of ones ignorance.

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

1 posted 2003-03-17 05:52 PM

I really like this one...it has a very good use of vocabulary. good job!

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

2 posted 2003-03-17 10:31 PM

This is really good. Normally I don't really like poems that short, but it works for this piece.

Jenn

don't ever let others tell you who you are

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