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Hallucination
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0 posted 2003-03-15 02:04 AM


"Young Boy"
© 2003 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved
(15/03/03)


I wish the skyscrabers would just move,
So a glimpse of light could sqeeze down here.
The tears rolling down my drowning skin
Is words I can't vocal cause of fear.

People is too busy to listen,
Pain is violently rocking the bod.
But I found a listener in a friend,
Fin'ly a winter where I own a coat...

I found my pair of ears,
I found my heart and love.
Still think someone told the man above...

Now I can lay down, and peacefully sleep,
There's no more falling in too deep.
I've been shining high, while feeling so low,
Climbing to reach "Beau's" all night show.
So many frames,
Got no photo in them.
Without real names,
This world can't comprehend.
Building up inside of my head,
Please try to forgive and forget.
The young boy,
The young boy within me...

My father is important to me,
And by all means you truly know that.
I felt relief within a heart beat,
Though I've been fighting so far off track.

Sentimental reasons formed my life,
Proud to be able to call you friend.
Shadows that once filled me up inside,
Finally surrendered in the end.

Got rewarded my soul,
Got true fresh air to breathe,
Like to thank whoever prayed for me...

I loved you before I met you,
Tried so much before you had me.
It's hard, to start, without a heart...
I loved you before I met you,
Tried so much before you had me.
It's hard, to start, without a heart...

Now I can lay down, and peacefully sleep,
There's no more falling in too deep.
I've been shining high, while feeling so low,
Climbing to reach beau's all night show.
So many frames,
Got no photo in them.
Without real names,
This world can't comprehend.
Building up inside of my head,
Please try to forgive and forget.
The young boy,
The young boy within me...

[This message has been edited by Hallucination (03-15-2003 04:04 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-15 04:42 PM




(big hugggsssssss) No no no, you can never forget the boy in your heart by all means necessary, forgiveness is the answer and that's it, for youth is what makes so many things possible and to sacrifice it will make the memories ever so vague as well as the sights ahead! (sad sigh) I send my angel hugs out to you, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sahring!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2003-04-21 10:21 AM


This is quite a sad but, a very bookworthy write....
HUGS,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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